Tuesday, December 29, 2009

How, Now, Time-Line?

In accordance to the 7 poems in 7 days challenge I signed up for, (which doesn't have a lot of rules. If you want to try it out yourself, you're more than free to do so!) I present my first poem!
Can someone tell me how,
the distant future turned to now?
"Yesterday, where art thou?"
I ask, as time continues to plow.
There's no way to rewind;
Life seems to go in one straight line.
Might as well put it out of my mind,
and try to have a good time. ^_^
Feedback, anyone? I'll write my 2nd poem tomorrow, though maybe I'll write another post later, I think. Keep an eye out.


J.N. Future Author said...

I really like this! ^.^ It actually has a point! mine didn't....it was just me complaining that I didn't know what to write.

Q said...

You might try using a rhyming scheme, rather than having all the lines in a stanza rhyme. Also, try to have your meter match everywhere if it's going to match anywhere.